Hi Pesi. I like how different you rainbow story is to all the others I have read. You had explain how even when you are doing something exciting you can be scared. I really like this as we all feel that way sometimes. I wonder if you could add some more detail to your story. What happened on the rainbow? How did you get over you fear? Did you see anything from up there? What was at the other end? Keep up the great blogging. From Mrs Carruthers.
Hi Pesi. I like how different you rainbow story is to all the others I have read. You had explain how even when you are doing something exciting you can be scared. I really like this as we all feel that way sometimes. I wonder if you could add some more detail to your story. What happened on the rainbow? How did you get over you fear? Did you see anything from up there? What was at the other end?
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From Mrs Carruthers.
Thank you your so kind Mrs Carruthers
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